wedding toppers for my friends-need feedback pls

[tysiony]

Hi Guys

I'm doing some wedding toppers for my friends.Naomi is starting to look like herself but Mike is way off and I need some feedback please.I've been staring at these guys too long-lol





Thanks

[jedideni]

Hi Sarah! I'll give it a try for you.....

I was looking at them side by side on my 'puter screen and it seems like Mike's nose on the sculpt is a little too big/wide/long. Maybe thin the front view a bit and add that bit of a sweep that goes from the bridge of the nose into the start of the cheeks. From the profile his nose looks a little more "rounded" and needs a bit more bulge to the front the chin. Another thing is that it appears like there is too much eyeball (if that makes sense?), would it be possible to recess them a bit further into the head?

Naomi I can really see the likeness. I'd soften and round out the features of her nose a tiny bit.

I think you're definitely on the right track and a few tweeks here and there are all you need. Do you have time to step away from it for a little while and come back to it with fresh eyes or are you on a tight schedule?



Dennis

[tysiony]

Cheers Jedideni

I was thinking maybe his eyes where a bit bulgey.Thank for the comments I can see what you mean.Yes I have time to step away for a bit.The wedding is not till end of March-but I do have another couple to work on for mid april-lol

Thanks will work on your feedback