THE CLUBHOUSE

Does it shine like steel are all spikes heavy made of metal..
Can they be made of bamboo.. or quils of feathers..
Is heavy metal used to snuff out dracula or the mummy maybe..
Can a heavy metal spike be worthy anything a recycle place.?
Sadly no a heavy metal spike is not made precious gold .
Used bits of a 1974 ford pinto all it's made what a shame..

I love your poetry Scuzz, you'll kill it this Thursday at the Cafe's Poetry Slam.

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• • It's like haiku - but without structure
    
    Here's one by someone else . . .
    
    • • • Nostalgic metal
          Reverberates melodic
          To merciful fates

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In my opinion,
that's really senryu,
but who truely knows?


"Senryu is a Japanese form of short poetry similar to haiku in construction: three lines with 17 or fewer morae (or on) in total. However, senryu tend to be about human foibles while haiku tend to be about nature, and senryu are often cynical or darkly humorous while haiku are more serious."

(senryu is 3 sylables)
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How about darkly serious? - would those be haiyu?

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I'd say the poetry display here more in line with the Vogons.

Tim Fortuna wrote:I'd say the poetry display here more in line with the Vogons.

Just don't put Scuzz's grandmother within feeding distance of the Ravenous Bugblatter Beast of Traal


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Tim Fortuna wrote:I'd say the poetry display here more in line with the Vogons.

I resemble that remark.

or, the meme age version: